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Q1. Thanks for joining the study. Today, I'd like to ask you some questions about traveling to new places. First, can you tell me about a memorable trip you took to a place you had never visited before?
A1. One of my best memories that I have never seen was visiting Singapore. Singapore is a multi-cultural country, so I was looking forward to seeing it. Of course, I really enjoyed talking and eating and praying there. Especially, I was interested in Singapore cuisine. For example, Hainan chicken rice and meepok.


Q2. I see. When visiting a new destination, do you prefer to travel alone or with companions? Why?
A2. Well, I prefer to go to go to the places that I have never seen. I prefer to go by alone by myself. There are some reasons. First, the country isn't always make us happier. For example, there are some serial incident or accident. So I don't want my friends or families to go there. For example, when I visit Turkey, it is a very


Q3. Good points. Airports often introduce rules about baggage limits that might make travel less comfortable but help speed up security checks. Do you think such policies are necessary for travel? Why or why not?
A3. I think it is important for us to make a policy for traveling procedures like carrying small belongings. There are some reasons. First, we have t we should take care of m my my belongings while while I we visit uh there. For example, uh East Asia Korea is not always a safe uh places uh like Cambodia and Vietnamese. Um


Q4. Interesting. Do you think that traveling to new places will become more common or less common in the next ten years? Explain your thoughts.
A4. I think traveling to new places become less in the decade. There are some reasons. For example, the government and the world international relations become worse compared to last previous years. For example, the United States attacked Venezuela last week. It was a terrible incident. I don't want my family to go




[添削回答]


Q1. Thanks for joining the study. Today, I'd like to ask you some questions about traveling to new places. First, can you tell me about a memorable trip you took to a place you had never visited before?
A1. One of my most memorable trips was visiting Singapore for the first time. I was really excited because Singapore is a multi-cultural country, and I wanted to experience that. I enjoyed exploring the city, talking with people from different backgrounds, and trying new foods. I especially loved the local cuisine, like Hainanese chicken rice and meepok noodles. Also, I had the chance to visit some temples and see how people practice their religions there, which was really interesting for me.


Q2. I see. When visiting a new destination, do you prefer to travel alone or with companions? Why?
A2. Well, I prefer to travel alone to places I haven’t seen before. There are a few reasons for this. First, sometimes going with others doesn’t always make the trip better, especially if there might be dangerous situations like accidents or unexpected incidents. For example, when I visited Turkey, I felt more comfortable going by myself because I didn’t want to worry about my friends or family’s safety. Overall, I like having the freedom to explore new places on my own.


Q3. Good points. Airports often introduce rules about baggage limits that might make travel less comfortable but help speed up security checks. Do you think such policies are necessary for travel? Why or why not?
A3. I think these baggage policies are important for traveling because they help keep everyone’s belongings safe and make the process faster at the airport. When people only bring a small amount of luggage, it’s easier for security to check everything, and there’s less chance of losing something. Also, when traveling to places that might not be as safe, like some areas in Asia, it’s better to carry less so you can watch your things more closely. So, I believe these policies are necessary.


Q4. Interesting. Do you think that traveling to new places will become more common or less common in the next ten years? Explain your thoughts.
A4. I think traveling to new places will become less common in the next decade. One reason is that international relations seem to be getting worse, which can make traveling more difficult and risky. For example, there have been recent conflicts between countries, like the United States and Venezuela. Because of these issues, many people, including my family, might feel less safe or interested in traveling abroad.




A1. "looking forward to seeing it."
⏩️ and I wanted to experience that.
「seeing it」だけでは漠然としていた「多文化国家シンガポール」への期待感を、「それを体験したかった」と具体的に述べることで、より明確で個人的な動機を加えています。これにより、学生さんの興味が聞き手に伝わりやすくなります。


A2. "First, the country isn't always make us happier."
⏩️ First, sometimes going with others doesn’t always make the trip better, especially if there might be dangerous situations like accidents or unexpected incidents.
「国が私たちを常に幸せにするわけではない」という元の表現は、一人旅を好む理由としては漠然としていました。改善された文では、危険な状況がある場合に他者と一緒に行くことが必ずしも旅行を良くするとは限らない、という具体的な状況を挙げることで、一人旅の動機がより明確になり、主張の説得力が高まりました。


A3. "I think it is important for us to make a policy for traveling procedures like carrying small belongings."
⏩️ I think these baggage policies are important for traveling because they help keep everyone’s belongings safe and make the process faster at the airport.
生徒の回答は「小さな手荷物を持つこと」が重要だと述べていますが、その具体的な理由や利点が不明瞭でした。改善された回答では、手荷物政策が旅行中に持ち物を安全に保つだけでなく、空港での手続きを迅速化するという二つの主要な利点を明確に提示し、主張をより具体的にしています。


A4. "the government and the world international relations become worse compared to last previous years."
⏩️ international relations seem to be getting worse, which can make traveling more difficult and risky.
国際関係が悪化するという記述だけでは、なぜ旅行が減少するのかというつながりが不明瞭でした。「旅行をより困難で危険なものにする可能性がある」という説明が追加されたことで、国際関係の悪化と旅行の減少との論理的な関連性が明確になり、説得力が増しました。