パンク修理で、トラブルを事前に防げる。

パパ友とやっと連絡先を交換する。

自分は何度でも生まれ変わる。

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Goverment has an responsibilty to speng their tax for people they may concern. prviding an opportunity to train worker's skills by working in the future. Company has an obligation to oversee employees' performance but not to have a substantial budget for their training. If govermennt does not want workers to help their training, government must give up gowing the nation's prosperities. For example, Japanese workers have excellent skills to build automobiles but they cannot have chances to brusg




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Government has a responsibility to spend tax money on projects that benefit the people, and providing opportunities for workers to receive new training is important for the future. Companies should monitor employee performance, but it is difficult for them to always pay for all the necessary training, especially when it is very expensive. If the government does not support workers’ training, it may slow the country’s economic growth and development. For example, Japanese workers are skilled in building cars, but without further training, they might not keep up with new technologies. Supporting training helps both workers and the entire nation prosper.




A1. "Goverment has an responsibilty to speng their tax for people they may concern. prviding an opportunity to train worker's skills by working in the future."
⏩️ Government has a responsibility to spend tax money on projects that benefit the people, and providing opportunities for workers to receive new training is important for the future.
「people they may concern」という漠然とした表現を「projects that benefit the people」と具体的にすることで、政府の責任が国民全体に利益をもたらすプロジェクトへの税金投入であることを明確にしました。また、「by working in the future」という不明瞭なフレーズを「is important for the future」と改善することで、労働者トレーニングの重要性をより直接的に述べています。


A1. "Company has an obligation to oversee employees' performance but not to have a substantial budget for their training."
⏩️ Companies should monitor employee performance, but it is difficult for them to always pay for all the necessary training, especially when it is very expensive.
企業がトレーニングに「substantial budgetを持たない」という断定的な表現は、現実と乖離している可能性があります。代わりに、「it is difficult for them to always pay for all the necessary training, especially when it is very expensive」とすることで、企業が常に全てのトレーニング費用を負担することの困難さ、特に高額なトレーニングの場合の課題を具体的に示し、より説得力のある議論になっています。


A1. "If govermennt does not want workers to help their training, government must give up gowing the nation's prosperities."
⏩️ If the government does not support workers’ training, it may slow the country’s economic growth and development.
「govermennt」のスペルミスを「government」に修正しました。また、「workers to help their training」という不自然な表現を「support workers’ training」に変更することで、労働者の研修を支援するという意味がより明確になりました。さらに、「give up gowing the nation's prosperities」というぎこちない言い回しを、「slow the country’s economic growth and development」とすることで、政府が研修を支援しない場合に国の経済成長と発展が滞る可能性を、より適切かつ具体的に表現できるようになりましたよ。