| 2026年01月12日(月) |
Beyond Singapore |
人生の転換期だったのは確か。シンガポール2年間。
しかし、それを超えていけ。
[自分の回答]
Q1. Thank you for participating. Today, I'd like to ask you some questions about styles of communication in social relationships. First, can you describe a situation where the way you communicated helped or hurt your relationship with a friend or family member? A1. Communication makes us happier because we have to bond to connect people, each other. For example, students and teachers in schools have relationships. Of course, we can learn many things from online. But I think the student in school has highly motivated to study.
Q2. Good points. When talking with others about a disagreement, do you prefer to be direct and open about your feelings, or do you tend to be more polite and avoid conflict? Why? A2. I should people avoid avoid talking in a direct way even in close relationships. For example, if I work in at office, say indirectly is a bad way to communicate each other. So if I report, if I level the problem, honestly, it is a very bad thing for my bosses. My boss feels bad and he got angry.
Q3. Interesting. At group gatherings, it is common for a few people to lead conversations while others mostly listen. Do you think it's important for everyone in a group to participate equally in conversations? Why or why not? A3. I disagree. All group members should talk equally in their conversations. Of course, people who want to talk or want to tell many things to everybody should say many things. But they are not o people is not always talking like that. They have each own chara characters. For example, if the
Q4. Thank you. For my last question, I'd like to ask about changes in social communication. Do you think that texting and online chat will become the main way people communicate in close relationships, or will face-to-face conversations remain more important? Why or why not? A4. Face-to-face uh information become more important. Uh I guess some uh there are some reasons. Uh first I I think uh an online online chat uh online uh texting is still uh popular, but uh it can be uh alternated uh to other things. For example, an AI chat. Uh it seems it seems that uh texting in or texting online people want to communicate with
[添削回答]
Q1. Thank you for participating. Today, I'd like to ask you some questions about styles of communication in social relationships. First, can you describe a situation where the way you communicated helped or hurt your relationship with a friend or family member? A1. Communication is really important in our relationships because it helps us connect and understand each other. For example, when I talk openly with my friends or family about my feelings or about problems, it usually makes our relationship stronger. But if I keep things inside or don’t express myself well, it can sometimes lead to misunderstandings or hurt feelings. So, the way I communicate can really help or hurt my relationships, depending on how clear and honest I am.
Q2. Good points. When talking with others about a disagreement, do you prefer to be direct and open about your feelings, or do you tend to be more polite and avoid conflict? Why? A2. I think people should avoid being too direct, even in close relationships. For example, if I work in an office, talking about problems too openly can create tension. If I report issues honestly, my boss might feel bad or get angry. So, I think it's better to be polite and try not to create conflict, especially at work.
Q3. Interesting. At group gatherings, it is common for a few people to lead conversations while others mostly listen. Do you think it's important for everyone in a group to participate equally in conversations? Why or why not? A3. I don’t think it’s necessary for everyone to participate equally in group conversations. People have different personalities—some are more talkative, while others prefer to listen. For example, quiet people might just enjoy hearing others’ stories instead of sharing their own. Forcing everyone to talk the same amount could make some people uncomfortable, so it’s better to let everyone join in however they feel most comfortable.
Q4. Thank you. For my last question, I'd like to ask about changes in social communication. Do you think that texting and online chat will become the main way people communicate in close relationships, or will face-to-face conversations remain more important? Why or why not? A4. I think face-to-face communication will still be more important in close relationships. While texting and online chat are really popular because they're easy and fast, they can't really replace real conversations. When you talk in person, you can see people's expressions and feelings more clearly, which helps make connections stronger. Texting is helpful, but face-to-face conversations create a deeper understanding between people.
A1. "For example, students and teachers in schools have relationships." ⏩️ For example, when I talk openly with my friends or family about my feelings or about problems, it usually makes our relationship stronger. 生徒さんの元の回答では、「学生と教師の関係」という一般的な例を挙げていましたが、コミュニケーションが人間関係をどのように強化するのかという具体的な説明が不足していました。この改善された文では、友人や家族とのオープンな対話が関係をより強くする方法を具体的に示しており、抽象的な主張がより明確で説得力のあるものになっていますね。
A2. "say indirectly is a bad way to communicate each other." ⏩️ talking about problems too openly can create tension. 生徒さんの元の文は、「間接的に話すことは悪いコミュニケーション方法である」と述べており、直前の「直接的な話し方を避けるべき」という主張と矛盾していました。改善された文では、「問題をあまりにもオープンに話すと緊張を生む可能性がある」と説明することで、なぜ職場で直接的な話し方を避けるべきなのかという理由を明確にしています。これにより、論点がより明確になり、主張に一貫性が生まれました。
A3. "I disagree. All group members should talk equally in their conversations." ⏩️ I don’t think it’s necessary for everyone to participate equally in group conversations. 生徒さんの回答は「Disagree (反対)」と述べているにもかかわらず、その後の文で「全員が平等に話すべきだ」と矛盾する主張をしていました。改善された回答では、平等な参加は不要であるという立場が明確に示されており、意見の矛盾が解消されています。
A4. "Face-to-face uh information become more important." ⏩️ I think face-to-face communication will still be more important in close relationships. 生徒さんの回答は対面コミュニケーションの重要性を述べていますが、どのような状況で特に重要なのかが不明瞭でした。改善された回答では、「親密な関係(close relationships)」という具体的な文脈を追加することで、対面コミュニケーションがなぜ、そしてどのような状況で重要になるのかを明確にしています。これにより、主張がより具体的で説得力のあるものになっています。
6中性洗剤で拭き上げる
中性洗剤を使って結露を防ぐ方法もあります。中性洗剤には「界面活性剤」が含まれており、水を弾く性質を持っています。そのため、窓に薄く塗ることで結露の発生が防げます。 塗るときは原液ではなく、水で20倍に薄めたものを使用します。柔らかい布巾に薄めた洗剤を含ませ、窓全体を拭き上げます。仕上げに乾拭きで泡や拭き筋を拭き取れば、結露対策完了です。ただし、効果は1週間ほどしか継続しないので、こまめに洗剤を塗る必要があります。
1結露防止アイテムを活用する
各メーカーが販売している結露防止アイテムを使用すると、結露を簡単に予防できます。結露防止アイテムとしてよく使われるのが、以下のようなアイテムです。 結露防止シート 吸水シート 結露防止スプレー 結露防止シートや吸水シートは窓に貼るだけで、結露を防止したり結露で生じた水分を吸い取ってくれたりする効果があります。いろいろなデザインの商品があるため、インテリアの一環としても取り入れやすいところが特徴です。 ただし、結露防止シート、吸水シートも放っておくとカビの原因となってしまうので、定期的に取り替えましょう。 窓にシートを貼ることに抵抗がある場合は、ふきかけるだけで結露を防いでくれる結露防止スプレーがおすすめです。最大1ヵ月効果が持続するものもあり、手間も少なくて非常に便利です。
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