40歳を過ぎたら、「できないことはできない」と素直に認めるべき。そこまでは好奇心の赴くまま、可能性を試してみるとよい。混沌を通して適性が見えてくるためである。

そして40代以降は、戦略的に動くべきである。過去の経験の中で、あなたが「成果を出せ、かつ継続できた分野」にリソースをすべて投入する。

**人生の中盤以降は、選択と集中による「一点突破」こそが、努力をレバレッジさせる最も確実性の高い戦略である。**その先に、大きく道が開ける。

ちなみに40歳を過ぎてのキャリア戦略は、新たなスキルへの投資より先に「負債整理」から始めるべき。

過去、惰性で習得した、低リターンであるにもかかわらず心身を消耗させる「重すぎるルーティーン」こそが、あなたの時間資源を食い潰す最大のリスクとなる。

[自分の回答]


Q1. Thank you for taking part in this study. Today, I'd like to ask you some questions about the ways people travel to work or school. First, can you describe how you usually get to your workplace or school, and what that journey is like for you?
A1. I usually uh go to work uh my workplace uh by a car but uh I prefer to uh use a bicycle uh recently. Uh I there are some reasons of why I choose the bicycle. First, uh uh there there is a heavy traffic jam uh from my my home to uh workplaces. Uh next uh I have to save uh money for uh for for visiting other places. That's why I uh I usually go to uh work my workplace by uh


Q2. Good points. Some people prefer traveling by public transportation, while others choose to use their own car or bicycle. Which do you prefer, and why?
A2. Uh I would like to use uh public transportation systems. Uh uh there are some reasons. Uh first uh now I use uh my car to uh go to my workplace, but uh I used to have a uh car accident so it was a very sad memory and experiences. Uh it is very dangerous for me to uh drive so uh if I if I I am available to public transportation systems uh for example uh train, uh tram or bus.


Q3. I see. In busy cities, traffic jams can lead to long delays, but using public transportation might mean less comfort and flexibility. Do you think it is better to deal with traffic in a private car, or to use public transportation and avoid driving stress? Why or why not?
A3. I prefer to use public transportation instead of my own cars. As I said, driving is a possibility to have traffic accident or traffic jumps. For example, when I go to my workplace by my own car, it takes more 40 minutes than usually I do. So in the morning time, there


Q4. Thank you. When considering the environment and convenience, do you think workplaces and schools should encourage people to use bikes or public transportation instead of cars? Explain your thoughts.
A4. I think it's a better way to encourage using using public transportation or bicycle to employees or students. When many people use private car, it is dangerous and their heavy traffic jump, especially in the mornings. To avoid these situations, school or workplaces encourage them to use




[添削回答]


Q1. Thank you for taking part in this study. Today, I'd like to ask you some questions about the ways people travel to work or school. First, can you describe how you usually get to your workplace or school, and what that journey is like for you?
A1. I usually go to my workplace by car, but recently I've started using a bicycle more often. There are a couple of reasons for this. First, there's always heavy traffic on the way from my home to work, which makes driving stressful and time-consuming. Also, biking helps me save money that I can use for other things, like traveling or going out. Overall, riding a bicycle is more convenient and cost-effective for me.


Q2. Good points. Some people prefer traveling by public transportation, while others choose to use their own car or bicycle. Which do you prefer, and why?
A2. I prefer using public transportation. Right now, I usually drive my own car to work, but I had a car accident before, and that was a really bad experience for me. Since then, I feel that driving is a bit dangerous. If I have the option, I would like to use public transportation like trains, trams, or buses because I feel much safer and more relaxed compared to driving a car myself.


Q3. I see. In busy cities, traffic jams can lead to long delays, but using public transportation might mean less comfort and flexibility. Do you think it is better to deal with traffic in a private car, or to use public transportation and avoid driving stress? Why or why not?
A3. I prefer to use public transportation instead of my own car. Driving in busy cities can easily lead to getting stuck in traffic jams or even accidents. For example, when I drive to my workplace, it can take more than 40 minutes longer than usual because of heavy traffic in the morning. With public transportation, I can avoid that stress, and it's usually more predictable and less tiring. That’s why I think taking public transport is better in busy cities.


Q4. Thank you. When considering the environment and convenience, do you think workplaces and schools should encourage people to use bikes or public transportation instead of cars? Explain your thoughts.
A4. I think it's better for schools and workplaces to encourage people to use bikes or public transportation. When too many people drive private cars, the roads get crowded and traffic is really heavy, especially in the morning. This not only wastes time, but also causes more air pollution. By using bikes or public transport, we can reduce traffic jams and help protect the environment. So I believe it's a good idea for organizations to support these options.




A1. "for visiting other places."
⏩️ that I can use for other things, like traveling or going out.
お金を節約して「他のこと」に使うという漠然とした表現に対して、「旅行や外出」といった具体的な例を挙げることで、話の具体性が増し、より理解しやすくなっています。


A2. "Uh I would like to use uh public transportation systems."
⏩️ I prefer using public transportation.
フィラーの「Uh」を削除し、より自然で簡潔な表現である「prefer using」を使用しました。「public transportation systems」も「public transportation」とすることで、より簡潔になりました。


A3. "I prefer to use public transportation instead of my own cars."
⏩️ I prefer to use public transportation instead of my own car.
「cars」を「car」に修正しました。「自分の車」と一般的に話す際は、単数形「car」を使用するのがより自然です。


A4. ✅ By using bikes or public transport, we can reduce traffic jams and help protect the environment. So I believe it's a good idea for organizations to support these options.
元の回答では文が途中で終わってしまい、結論が不明確でした。改善された回答では、公共交通機関や自転車を利用することの具体的な利点（交通渋滞の緩和、環境保護）を明確に述べ、全体をうまく締めくくっています。これにより、提案のポジティブな効果が明確になり、主張がより説得力を持つようになります。